Wednesday, January 18, 2017

Week 1 Story-Blew the Magical Thinker

 Every night monstrous livestock plagued the Village. During the day the harmless sheep and and cows would graze in the field, but by night they would transform into viscous monsters. No one knew what made these animals turn savage or how to stop it. These creatures prowled the woods that surrounded the Village and would prey on the village people. When Blew was born his parents knew he was special. From early-on in his childhood, Blew was a calm child. He never cried or lost his temper. He was mature for his age in every aspect expect for his love of exploring. One day when he was ten years old he was snooping around in the attic, where he found an old shepherds horn. When he blew the horn something amazing happened, a sound as loud as a yell and a strong wind came from the horn. When his father heard this he knew his son had done something amazing. That night as the animals began to descend on the Village, Blew's father had him blow the horn to scare the animals away. Right before their eyes, the animals turned around and left the Village. The father and son couldn't believe it! They had found a way to save the village! 


The original Little Boy Blue while he naps. Web Source

From that night on, armed with his horn Blew would go out and sit on the hay, when the monstrous animals would get too close to the city he would blow his horn and  the powerful sound would push the animals away from the city, scaring them back into the shadows of the woods. 

Blew did this for many years. At first he was excited to have the honor of protecting the city, to be the chosen one. But as he grew up, Bleu no longer wanted this job.  He pleaded with his dad to let one of his other brothers take over, but his dad refused. 

“Please father, I want to experience the world outside of this Village. I have done this for twelve years. Haven’t I done enough?,” Blew pleaded. But with one look at his father he knew it was no use. 

“Stop whining boy, you should be honored that you were chosen for this life. This was destined for you.” 

Bleu tried one more time to reason with his father, “Shouldn’t I get a say in how I live my life?”

Expecting anger from his father he was surprised to see resignation. “ I’m truly sorry son, but we are in no position to question or challenge fate. The best we can do is to make the best out of the hand that we have been dealt.”  With a strong pat on his shoulder, Blew watched his father walk out of the door. 

Blew knew that he needed to take his future into his own hands.  He knew the animals only changed at night, so he needed to find a new way to protect the Village while they were sleeping. The following nights, he tried several different ideas. He locked the animals in pastures, but they still managed to get out. Next he tried to distract the animals with piles of food in the jungle, yet they still came back to the village.  He knew he was running out of ideas, so he began to think. There had to be a reason the animals didn’t change during the day. 

That night he surrounded the small village with torches. He thought that if he could keep the light going, even during the night, that the animals wouldn’t change. What he saw surprised him, armed with his horn; he saw that the animals didn’t change. He tested this out for the next two weeks and got the same results. When he approached his father and asked him to come see what he had discovered, his father was amazed. 

“Looks like you were destined to save the Village, one way or another. “ He father exclaimed with a heavy pat on the back. 

From that night on Blew realized that he has more to offer than just what destiny had decided. Blew was finally able to be a normal boy. 


Bibliography: This story is bases on the nursery rhyme "Little Boy Blue" in The Nursery Rhyme Book, edited by Andrew Lang.

Author’s Note: I really enjoyed getting to read different nursery rhymes. When I read the story about Little Boy Blue I immediately thought that there had to be something special to a little boy who herds the sheep and cows. I was also struck with the idea about what comes after the fairytale ending or the happily ever after. I knew that Little Boy Blew would one day grow up and I wanted to see who he would become. I hold the firm belief that everyone has something special about them, whether it is something they are born with or something they discover. Blew in my story might have been destined to be one thing, but he was took control and became who he wanted to be!  



5 comments:

  1. Reading nursery rhymes at this age really takes us back to our childhood. I start thinking of my childhood when I read or see others reading nursery rhymes. "Little Boy Blue" was one nursery rhyme that I had not read, but I enjoyed seeing it through your eyes. Good work!

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  2. Your story was a fresh take on a nursery rhyme that everyone has read once or twice! I really enjoyed your spin on things and your dedication to detail was amazing. I definitely get pulled back into my childhood too when I read nursery rhymes! Well done.

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  4. This was very nostalgic and I loved this. I liked the story it told and how he learned how to fix the problem. Everyone can relate to having a problem and trying to overcome it. I thought it was funny how is name was Blew and he was blowing a horn. This is a great way to bring up old emotions while being something completely new. Great job!

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  5. Katie, I love mystical stories (animals turning savage?!). There are a few comma errors (or you accidentally left them out). One small thing, you wrote "Bleu" instead of "Blew" in the paragraph starting "Blew did this for many years" and again later in the story. I'm not sure if his name was really supposed to be Bleu and if your computer is autocorrecting it to Blew. I do really like your idea of telling us how a character from a nursery rhyme would be in the future! Overall, great story!

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